Beautiful. 💖
Beautiful. 💖
Thank you!
OMG SO LOOKING FORWARD TO THIS!!! I can't wait! Thanks for using my music! :D I think you did a great job with the audio editing as well!
- SuperTonic64 (Tiara)
Thanks so much for liking it :D It was an honor to use such a great track from you. It's top notch quality!
I'm glad you enjoyed the editing, too.
I hope to show you the short animation once it's all done :D! Time for more epicness!!!
It's so...ironic! :D
BP should play this as they are cleaning up the massive ocean of oil they caused out in the Gulf! :D Great job! :)
~Smart
hahahahah they definatly should. a song entitled "oil ocean" hell, this should be their theme song.
hahah thanks again for the review, 9, and yur time in listening
I liked the first couple of seconds of it...
But it can get kind of repetitive after awhile.
My suggestion would be to add some chord changes every other bar or so, and maybe some kind of soft melody line. I think that will keep the interest going.
The sound effects sound cool, however, I don't think they are fitting to the piece, especially if sound effect doesn't fit thematically with what is happening in the menu.
Good job though! I can't wait to hear more! ^_^
~smartpoetic
Thanks for the review,
I'll take into account what you've said when making future pieces like this.
Cheers
--totojimbob
I...
Don't know what is going on harmonically and structurally. I hear parallel 5ths and octaves everywhere, and the horns are making impossible leaps.
My suggestion to you is to rework this composition. Look up the ranges for the french horn, as well as study a little bit of theory as well as other music to help you refine your work. :)
to be honest, I dont know a single thing about music, I just click randomly around on finale get something that sounds good, and then rework from that.
The mastering...
not only amplified this wonderful song, but also brought new depthness and perception to this piece. Great job, and I can't wait to hear more! ^^
~Smartpoetic
Thanks, it was a lot of work, but the song is very good done.
Compositionally...
A substantial piece worthy of most praise. :) However, from a mastering standpoint, you could add a little reverb to make the piano sound less dead (musically, not literally) and allow the piece to sound less computerized. I can also hear where the piece could move a lot more dynamically, so bring out some of those awesome low bass chords and crazy piano riffs! ^_^
I hope my suggestions help, and I can't wait to hear more! ^_^ Great job! ^_^
Taking all of that into consideration, I might as well turn it into a piano duet toccata. Whatever the hell that is. XD. But yeah, all good suggestions, all will probably be employed in the remix.
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