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Crazay! :O

Pretty cool, dude. :D I like the concept a lot, and I wish you would develop the theme a little more. Hey, if you keep working at this theme, it could be OCRemix worthy! :O

Good job! :)
~Smartpoetic

Hmm...suspenseful.

I only have a few suggestions for this piece:

1) Develop the melody a little more--it gets kinda redundant after a while, however, it is a little frighting. :D The bells (or whatever the moving notes you used) drive it along a little more.

2) Add some reverb--yes, reverb can make any orchestral piece go from flat to live in a matter of seconds. :D (Though, don't do too much, like I tend to do. :P)

3) Rename the sucker--Yes, "orchestral thing" does not *sound* like a very authentic name for a song. Next time, give it a name that means something to your, or your listeners. :)

Other than that, good job! ^_^ I can't wait to hear more from you. :)

~Smartpoetic :)

DaGrahamCraka responds:

thanks for teh advice. but this wasnt supposed to be a full song or anything, just testin things out.

Wow! ^^

This song is heartfelt, meaningful, and it really expresses the sorrows of life and the world (and hitting little brothers, of course :D).

I love the arppegios that constantly run through the bass lines. You have a really nice grasp of polyphony and I love the grace notes that run through the piece. That adds real emotion and dynamic to the overall piece.

The only small gripe I have is the clarity. The song sounds just a little muffled, but other than that, it is a beatiful, expressive song.

Good job and I can't wait to hear more from you! ^_^

~Smartpoetic

(I'll PM you with that answer to the question you asked me about soundfonts. ;))

BlazingDragon responds:

Thanks a ton, you Smarty! :P I didn't notice it at first, but I can see how it is a bit muffled though. I wrote it in the Fl Studio demo though, and with no saving...A little late for editing, lol.

Thanks again for the awesome review! :D

A beautiful melody...

I interpret this piece in many ways, from imagination waiting to be awakened to forever sleeping worlds.

I love how you incoprated the music box along with strings and that beautiful horn solo. Your sence of polyphony is awesome, and that's the sign of an awesome composer.

Great lullaby MaestroRage. I can't wait to hear more from you! ^_^

~Smartpoetic

(P.S.

Thank you for your help! :) I really appreciate it, believe me. :) )

MaestroRage responds:

I'm glad you enjoyed the piece smartpoetic, you nailed the song on the dot! The image I used was worlds, waiting to be born. I thought, just because nobody thought of that world yet, doesn't mean it didn't exist right? I can see the characters of that unborn world huddled together around a campfire, joking with each other, and just waiting.

"I bet i'll have to kill you >:)"
"Oh ple-EASE!"

And when the world is born, and the "creator" stops visiting that world... it returns to a state, undisturbed and free. Altered, changed, and perhaps destroyed by the "creator" for their whim.

It is a foolish sentiment I know, but it is one I thought about for a long while.

Thank you for the review!

(You're welcome, any time ;)

*imagines a soft cloud floating off somewhere*

A very high, soft cloud. O_O"

Awesome piece, SoulStrings! ^_^ I love the looping bell/harp part with the string and french horn accompament. A very relaxing, and dreamy song, indeed. :)

The only critisim I have is that the strings sound like it needs more echo to it, but you know what? XD I'm a sucker for reverb. >_>" Other than that, a great, loopable theme! ^_^

I can't wait for your next work! :)
~Smartpoetic

You are the master of percussion!

I love this song's percussion line! The snares (and that glass/metal sound) really gives a feel for the situation in that song. Also that bass drum (I could be wrong) solo sounds really awesome during the string intro. The choir also adds a nice effect to the beginning of the piece.

I can't wait for more! :)
~Smartpoetic

A very akward situation, indeed...

But it's so cool! :O

I like how the beginning of the song goes from very serious sounding (war march sounding) to that strange bell line to the slow string line and back to serious march once again. Whatever soundtrack you're working on, it must fit very nicely with that situation. :D

Great job! ^_^
~Smartpoetic

Wow! :D

This song is really cool. :D I can imagine a bunch of little mice running around, doing crazy things (like Tom and Jerry! :D). I loved some of the instrumentation you used throughout the piece, and the flute/oboe melody sounds really awesome. The pizzacato strings also make the piece feel sneaky and light. :D

Awesome piece! (Mal said she liked it too. :D)
~Smartpoetic

*salutes you* :D

It really felt like a war march! :D I loved the main oboe solo line, and I loved how every instrument added a new element to the march. You could very well be the next Sousa when it comes to marches! ^_^

Nice song! I can't wait for your next work. :)
~Smartpoetic

As a final piece...

How inspiring! I feel as though this piece is mixing many musical elements together, kindly telling the story of your adventure through compostion and music.

This piece is very inspirational, and one of the most strange and interesting works I've heard in a long time.

MaestroSorrow, you've been a wonderful mentor to me, and I will really miss you! :( I hope your musical career will take flight, and I hope you will create wonderful things! Good luck, friend! ^_^

Games industry professional, composer, & all around nerd. 🎵

Tiara @SuperTonic64

Age 35, Female

Composer (Hobbyist)

UA School of Music (Grad)

Seattle, WA

Joined on 6/1/04

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